Meet Betsy
Welcome to my virtual studio. As both a writer and designer, I’m driven by a curiosity about the world. In my studio, I take that curiosity and use it to create new worlds. I write for kids and adults as well as a good deal of freelance non-fiction. Explore to find out more about me, my books, and my thoughts on writing as well as the thoughts of friends who stop by the studio. If you’ve got something you’d like to share reach out to me through the contact form. I’d love to hear from you. Scroll down to read what’s been happening in the studio.
The Dutch House
I could chose a lot of things to talk about when it comes to The Dutch House by Ann Patchett. It has layered characters, a compelling story, and a setting that is as much a character as the narrator. Nothing stood out for me more, though, than the way Patchett takes readers with her moving back and forth through time.
As the story builds, we jump between the narrator’s childhood, teenage years, middle and late adulthood in the natural way of someone recalling their life. But Patchett uses very few obvious sign-post statements. Instead of highlighting each transition by saying something like ‘It was 1969 and I was twelve,' Patchett keeps you with her simply by referencing whether or not the characters are still smoking, what school the narrator is coming home from or whether he and his sister are inside or outside the Dutch House in their car. This style of transition feels organic, but it also sets readers up so when they eventually learn why the narrator went to those schools, is sitting in that car or even why he smokes it’s like discovering something about a good friend. The result is a narrative that feels organic and effortless. The skill to pull it off is masterful.